This is a much better attempt Nathan - well done for revisiting and reworking it. You need to spend a good amount of time analysing as much of the 4 different areas as you can; sound in particular here is lacking more detail compared to your shots section. You've also missed off mise-en-scene!
This is a much better attempt Nathan - well done for revisiting and reworking it. You need to spend a good amount of time analysing as much of the 4 different areas as you can; sound in particular here is lacking more detail compared to your shots section. You've also missed off mise-en-scene!
ReplyDeleteI will make sure to analyse more for the 4 areas in future, at the time I competed this I didn't realize that mise-en-scene needed to be present.
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